book review: All-Butter ShortDead

This little prequel needs a bit of work. While a fun little romp for the first bit you aren’t sure if the main character is male or female. Obviously written by someone who knows the town of Oxford there are great little bits tossed in but at the same time the story is a bit jumpy, missing something that would help the pacing of the tale. A good beginning but needs a read through and some additional padding to make it flow better.

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