short story review: Bewitching the Werewolf

While this was a short story and well written I took a star off for pacing. We went from the introduction of the two characters to the conclusion in under five minutes! Just moved way too fast. Yes, this is two fantasy creatures but come on we need a wee bit more build up to the conclusion of this little tale. I can only hope that this writer’s longer works are paced better.

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